My Dragon System

TLDR: It's ok. MVS is much better. After reading this entire series I am left very mid. It starts out strong, a bit rushed in parts, but strong. Good plot lines, believable characters, interesting story. But, as it progresses the number of plot holes, the rushed and unfinished nature of the story, and character breaking, logic defying story choices by the author increase gradually until the end which is genuinely one of the worst endings I have ever seen in any work of fiction ever. At the beginning of reading this work it is a solid 5/5. By the end it is a 1/5. Over all I am left with a 3/5 and the undeniable reality that I would not have bothered to finish this at all if I hadn't loved MVS so much.

Overall I enjoyed it. Major pacing issues, plenty of plot holes, but the story itself is good, and the lore of the world is great. I feel like it could have easily been another 300-400 chapters and it would have fixed the pacing issues a lot. The last 100 or so chapters were super rushed and it just ruined the suspense. On to the next!

It's a good story but a few plots are the same as MVS. I feel like author rushed the end. A couple more chapters would have been nice. And I'm personally not happy with the end, but overall it's a nice read and I really liked Ray.

Decent novel. I see many plot repeats though with MVS Finished on 9/8/2024 Overall OK book, characters act really dumb sometimes though, but if you have read any other system novel like MVS it answers plenty of lore and plot questions, origins and more.

This novel is amazing. It had a good plot and journeying with the Ray in his adventures were fun but the ending sucks a little and I feel it was rushed for some reason. I'm off to read the sequel, My Werewolf System and hopefully, this problem will be fixed. A great read. I definitely recommend it

I like the story from the time Ray started from being incarnated from being a Mighty Dragon. It was funny how he peed on this father and thought it was a fire blast. It's just incredible with twisted changes Read about this book and you will see how you will love it. .

Listen, I’d recommend reading this novel to all those who’ve read well into Vampire system. Once you’re in the thick of the story, this novel can act the role of filling in some gaps. Otherwise, it’s alright I guess? I wouldn’t rate it so harshly as some of the other reviews, but I don’t think I’d have read this as a stand-alone for sure. Overall I’d say read it if you’ve enjoyed vampire system but feel it got a little tedious at any point, then I’d recommend breaking things up by reading this novel and continuing Vampire system once you’re done here.

As far as prequels go this was completely disappointing. The novel started amazingly but after a while it definitely wind down to horrible dialogue misconception and outright chronological disorder. The sequel redeem this

I have never been so disappointed with an ending in my life to the point I would refuse to read any other by the author of this book. I hated how the author wrote out Sen as if he was just rolling over, I hate how there was an undetermined time skip, the story was rushed as all hell. . . don't get me wrong, it had a good plot but that was pretty much all it had going for it. . .

Most meh novel I've ever read. The start is decent but after about 50 chapters the constant plot holes and inconsistencies get annoying. The abilities are inconsistent and the characters are bland and one-note (i. e. strong dude is dumb, lady is compassionate but cries every other time, etc. ). My Vampire System, the author's other novel, is waaaay better than this.